A Look Back

Today’s visual writing prompt: Your favorite character somehow ends up in this setting. What is he or she thinking (or saying) right now?

He had to look back before he could move forward. He couldn’t allow himself to forget, not just all the things he did wrong, but the things he did right. And most of all, the people who did right by him… of which there was only one and right now, she needed him. He saw it in her eyes the last time he looked into them up close, just before he destroyed the perfect world she’d built for herself and their children.. just before he kissed her and showed her that she would always be the only one for him even when she belonged to someone else.


Published by Liz

Romance me writes stories with happy endings while my naughty pen writes the naughty ones. I also accidentally step on Legos daily while balancing my cup of tea and biscuits.

5 thoughts on “A Look Back

  1. Geez, I imagined my character tied to the tracks while a dastardly fellow in a top hat slicked about! Yours sounds so much better!

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